Monday, January 28, 2008
Girl
This poem was hilarious. The flow or lack of it made it interesting to read because there was no hint as to what was comming next. The punctuation was also amazing. There were no periods, three question marks, and the rest of the breaks were from colins, semi-colins, cammas, or dashes. The image I got from reading this was that of a whitty old lady attempting to teach a young girl how to behave.
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I thought this passage was very intertaining! I also pictured it to be an older lady but i thought of her as talking to her daughter on her death bed telling her every thing she knew!
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